Collision

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  • Devotion

    Collision

    Space evolves us
    two bound together
    two speak one name
    rising they will not be broken
    speak.
    Our speech gathers the sun, two suns,
    one moon.
    Colliding together I see you.
    Show them what’s inside
    Let us show them the collision.
    Our hearts are golden with vision
    We are vision.

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    Crush commented on Collision

    11-19-2009

    "our hearts are golden with vision'....again you have inspired me with a lovely line. i like your style. thanks.

    diggz commented on Collision

    09-08-2009

    Very clear and expanding, universal visualization , a vision so true.

    SAYANDSEE commented on Collision

    05-12-2009

    OO, O, 1, 1/1, 2/2

    Hoosierpoet commented on Collision

    05-06-2009

    This has kind of a haunting, mysterious flow and ebb to it, and a kind of unavoidable fate - like the two of you were meant to be together from the time you were born. I enjoyed reading this - and hope you write many more. Moses

    StandingBear commented on Collision

    05-05-2009

    Two pairs of footprints on the same path. Nice write.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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