Battle Light

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    Battle Light
    Day could not exist without night
    His hand softens my hard thoughts
    When fire melts me your frozen life believes
    Falling trees swing me down
    Sing to me
    Light burn my soul
    Hold me tight
    Perfection rips the sky
    Stars descend his sight
    Falling forest let me be
    Whisper to me
    Light erupt my heart
    Grasp upright
    Protection from armor
    Freedom from confliction
    His sword sways complication
    The (k)night turns days into lighter vision
     
     

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    arronpalmer commented on Battle Light

    10-15-2010

    There is something so engrossing, engaging about the way you write. I'm not sure quite what it is, but I'll come back when I know. I'd argue that this piece in particular is flawless.
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Battle Light

    09-15-2010

    Very moving indeed... i like the framework and all of the things spoken therein.
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    Crush commented on Battle Light

    11-19-2009

    ''...when fire melts me your frozen life begins..." oh that sounds so disgustingly beautiful to me....my goodness. thanks.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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