The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

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    The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

    Deceiving Death was Her only option.
    Cold and torn, She ran towards the Door.
    Blankness all around, tightening at Her throat.

    Restriction of air came to no surprise,
    Still, She panicked and tried to lean on the Door’s side

    Occupying space was of no affliction.
    It was Her untamed heart that needed the Door’s attention.

    Light did not escape through the gap, yet She knew that it was there.
    Her grasp was merely a trap.

    Standing, She was not alone for the Door,
    Although torn,
    was her mirror and her escape.
    Opening the Door was the problem, broken hands conflicted Her fate.

    Hesitation restricted what limbs still functioned to be still.
    If only She could kill,
    kill what’s inside, kill the protruding rot.

    With the wind pulsating through Her veins She grasped the warm brass knob,
    twisting and turning, It opened not,
    but with only the handle in Her hand,
    She became alive again.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

    09-15-2010

    Liken this one... i just try ta do what i do and then witness the Doors being blown open all on there own accord

    litldeer commented on The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

    03-05-2009

    The imagery in this poem in fantastic. Great job!

    dannyrobertm commented on The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

    02-19-2009

    very nice. everybody's had a door or two to open that seemed to steal something from them by just being there. though this seems to be THE door (enlightenment, purpose, etc.), it could apply to all the smaller doors as well.

    Infect commented on The Door: Inhaling the Grasp

    02-14-2009

    the visuals here are intense. the build up is captivating. Dig it I do

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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