Erosion

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    Erosion

    Watch this act of pain,
    no care.
    no shame.
    Look into my eyes see red before the decline,
    listen carefully you are the erosion
    no sight.
    no solution.
    Feel the rocks under my skin
    you are the one who falls.

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    Phoenix9 commented on Erosion

    05-04-2009

    passion!!!

    clown commented on Erosion

    02-14-2009

    Jesus?

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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