Shut It Off Two See

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  • Devotion

    Shut It Off Two See
    We are freer with each other than we are alone.
    Attachment of mine set by your minds code

    Counting zero to one.

    Shutting off your system fails
    But I’m your shelve that places you yourself

    Slowly zero becomes none.

    Horizontally I’ll take away your repetitive motion
    With lights off thinking there’s no circuit solution

    There are no numbers


    With lights on
    You can see.
    We rise with motion now,
    letting go
    Forever nothing is lost
    You found me

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    arronpalmer commented on Shut It Off Two See

    10-15-2010

    Stunning. I would buy your book now. Twice probably.
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    SAYANDSEE commented on Shut It Off Two See

    05-12-2009

    THERE ARE NO NUMBERS WAS MY FAVORITE PART.
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    Phoenix9 commented on Shut It Off Two See

    05-04-2009

    nothing is ever lost, great write
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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