Chocolate

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    Chocolate
    Deep into his lucid eyes
    I can see the way I look
    I can see the way he wants to touch me
    I can feel the breaths he took

    The body of this man I have
    His complexion profound and polised
    The way he stands so strapping and so rigid
    He could never be demolished

    Why his skin is just like chocolate
    Just so luscious and so sweet
    A delectable and enchanting sight
    That will knock you off your feet

    And the way he touches me inside
    Is a feeling that I just cannot explain
    And the way we melt and then blend together
    Well damnit---I cant complain

    We know there isnt anything like chocolate
    You can never have too much
    It is a very incredible and delicate thing
    You should always treat it as such

    His chocolate hands on my chocolate body
    My chocolate hands on his
    A chocolate death is the way to go
    Just chocolate...thats what it is.

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    doctord commented on Chocolate

    10-16-2009

    Hey, what about vanilla? There's nothin like a chocalate-vanilla swirl...lol... don't discriminate...lol
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    MizBoonie

    10/19/2009

    I wrote about vanilla and caramel too!!! Im gonna add em' so u can read em'

    BraveMoon commented on Chocolate

    08-16-2009

    I agree w/ bernie, LOL, my attention was perked, ears pricked, then... uh!?!? but that's OK, my imagination is fertile enough I was three more stanzas past your end before I realized you ran out of your own words LOL And i give you full recognition, you began the process well. Wah'do
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    bernie commented on Chocolate

    08-08-2009

    I like the piece. I would have loved it had you given me a delightfully unexpected suprise within the last line of your poem. You started me on a journey with this poem. A journey that got better and better but by end just seemed to fizzle out.
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    MizBoonie

    08/17/2009

    Chocolate is just a first part to the trilogy of flavors that I have written about. The ending to it was sort of meant to be fizzled out because it was just like I was getting quiet the closer I got to the end. I never really meant for the end to pop. But thanks for your opinion though. I'll keep it in mind when Writing things that I do want to pop at the end.

    amber12172 commented on Chocolate

    07-03-2009

    I like this poem. Its nice. :) ....................
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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