and i don't say a word

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and i don't say a word

I hear the bullies but never, almost never, the victims

I hear the fake laughs used to stop the worry

I hear the truth and the dark

I hear nervous pencils tapping

And whispers from one to another about yet someone else

I hear the sobs released from the brave soldier who’s given up the fight

I hear the crush from each soul as it’s broken and reformed

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MootPoint commented on and i don't say a word

05-15-2013

I would change dark to darkness. Also, I would end in the words, "and i don't say a word". Overall I enjoyed this write. :)

xefire

05/17/2013

Thank you and I will go in and fix that Thanks very much :)

MootPoint

05/17/2013

Don't feel obligated to change it. It's just my opinion. Please do me the favor and read and comment on some of my stuff. Thx

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

xefire’s Poems (30)

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lines 1
I won't let you back in. 0
Eating Me 2
NO! 0
flicker 0
HER 0
I wish I knew how to say good bye 0
One thousand times 0
equalizer 2
there is nothing I can do 0
The Good Child 0
Earth 0
and i don't say a word 1
ode to death 0
you're gone now 0
dead tree 0
Marissa.. 0
Snow white 0
Listen 1
Because she is me 0
Delecate Flower 0
Alphabet 0
She pulled up my sleeve 0
It doesn't hurt 0
Eyes that love 0
I really do wish the best for you 1
shudder 0
Never upon a time 1
Why? 0
You'll be diapointed 0