YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

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    This poem was written for my mom some time ago, but can be applied to anyone with a loving, generous spirit.

    YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

    You're beautiful...


    Like a rose, your heart is tender
    And like a rock, your spirit's strong
    Look at how you love!


    When others turn and walk away
    You're the one who comes to stay
    To lend a strong arm, a listening ear
    Embracing sorrows, drying tears


    Like a tree bearing fruit
    You give to those in need
    Within the hearts of the wounded
    You plant love's seed...


    And oh, how you shine!


    I've never seen a brighter smile
    So genuinely warm, like the kiss of a child
    Your inner beauty radiates from your face
    Where you go, like an angel, you light up the place


    The light of your love reflects like a jewel
    In my eyes, you'll aways be beautiful


    (c) Copyright 2002 Melanie D. West

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    Chaos128 commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

    12-15-2009

    Genuiness is a rare characteristic (in my experience), but your work here makes me feel like I've encountered some.
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    mdpoetgirl

    12/16/2009

    Thanks a lot, Chaos... good to hear from you, and glad you liked this one ;-)

    organicchick commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

    06-01-2009

    Very warm, loving words. I love this heartfelt poem.........made me feel like hugging someone i love!!! Thanks for the sweet words!
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    mdpoetgirl

    06/02/2009

    Then by all means, give someone a hug! LOL... glad you enjoyed it!

    jceclipse commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

    06-01-2009

    Beautifully put. This reminds me of.................. the face of GOD. I'm sure the same would probably be said for you.
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    mdpoetgirl

    06/01/2009

    Yes, this poem could definitely be a description for GOD. He embodies all of this and so much more! Thanks for reading...

    Chrisjan commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

    05-29-2009

    Your poem is imaginative full of detail and love- true friends, share + give your loves', from above ! Thanks for sharing.
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    mdpoetgirl

    05/30/2009

    Thanks, Chris.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.
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