CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

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    CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    Consider the pattern of nature
    One season flows into next
    The world keeps turning and life goes on
    no matter how complex



    So, too, we must learn to flow WITH
    and accept the winds of change
    Like a ship set to sail
    the graceful tide propels
    in sunshine and in rain



    Despite the waves that beat against
    the ship, its path is sure
    The might of God directs it
    until it reaches shore



    How calm this drifting vessel glides
    when flowing freely with the tide
    On calmer seas, through raging storms
    safely reaching the other side.


    (c) Copyright 2003 Melanie D. West

    "To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under heaven: A time to be born, and a time to die...A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance..." (Ecclesiastes 3:1-2,4)

    Then they cry out to the LORD in their trouble, and He brings them out of their distresses. He calms the storm, so that its waves are still. Then they are glad because they are quiet; so He guides them to their desired haven. Oh, that men would give thanks to the LORD for His goodness, and for His wonderful works to the children of men! (Psalm 107:28-31)

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    Chaos128 commented on CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    03-19-2010

    True faith is a steadfast rock, but the worm of doubt undermines the best intentions of (too) many. I like pieces that make me think, MD; I guess you can tell I love this one.
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    mdpoetgirl

    03/21/2010

    Great, chaos! Very few ppl comment on this one, tx for taking the time to read it! Take care ;-)

    Marsink commented on CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    10-28-2009

    Your words are a beacon always pointing to the saving power of Christ. Thank you
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    mdpoetgirl

    10/29/2009

    Thank you for readingj, Mars.

    kmooney commented on CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    10-16-2009

    Another beautiful write. I admire your style and talent. You obviously have a strong faith in the Lord. It shines throughout your work. I love the analogy and the imagery here. Took my mind a spiritual cruise. Thanks for sharing... Kevin
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    mdpoetgirl

    10/16/2009

    Thanks, Kevin ;-) Yeah, God is everything to me, so only naturally I'd write about Him often. Blessings...

    jademelissa74 commented on CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    06-04-2009

    The presentation is outstanding, to back it up withthe Word of God was that little touch that made it brilliant! I love this poem! You are a very blessed writer. You have a gift. Continue to write, you manage to reach the reader, each and every time. :))
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    mdpoetgirl

    06/04/2009

    thank you. God is often my influence for writing.

    Chrisjan commented on CHANGE (c) Copyright 2003

    06-01-2009

    Your poem is filled with connected imagary, that guides the reader, with a direction, on how Lifes flows. Ecclesiastes added to the poem, though, I think. Thanks for sharing.
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    mdpoetgirl

    08/24/2012

    Hey Chris, don't know how I managed to miss your comment here... thank you so much for your taking the time to read my poem... blessings

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)
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