your past

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    your past

    Looking in the mirror thinking about how long people put you last

     

    Looking in the mirror contemplating on what you have been through in the past

     

    Looking in the mirror wondering how long your beauty last

     

    Looking in the mirror deliberating on all the people you have been with in the past

     

    Looking in the mirror talking to a reflection of yourself gets you no where and no answer

     

    That you need to succeed so live your life without thinking twice until you are put to rest

     

    Taking nothing to your grave that happened in the past but the best so you can rest.

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    Luscious40 commented on your past

    11-02-2009

    Love this!! I hope you took my advice. There are too many of our young, doing wrong. THIS IS YOUR OUTLET!! Don't let anyone take that from you.. Keep writing. Not all, is going to like your work, so you just have to digest the good with the bad, trust me; I know it make you much stronger. I love your work.. Luscious
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    almonord1990

    11/05/2009

    thank you.. And yes i will

    MIKE3447 commented on your past

    10-04-2009

    MANY OF US LIVING TODAY NEVER THINK LIKE THIS. IT JUST TOUCHED ME BECAUSE ITS TRUE. AND EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS TRUE. I LOVE YOUR WORK.
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    jademelissa74 commented on your past

    10-04-2009

    This piece is very inspirational and very heartfelt. I like the passion in which you have written this poem. Good job!
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    almonord1990

    10/04/2009

    thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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