You are the maker of who I am

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    You are the maker of who I am

    You make me feel brilliant

    You make me feel inspired

    You make me feel so encouraged.

     

    When I am around you

    You bring me nothing but laughter and joy.

     

    However when we are far apart

    I start to feel hopeless.

     

    But always pull me aside and you let me know that I’m attractive.

    You let me know that I can be anything that I want be.

     

    You let me know things that I never thought of before

    And you also make me feel ways that I never felt before.

     

    You and I

    We laugh together

    We even pray together

    You and I share tears together

     

    You tell me that I am someone

    You told me that I am someone that will soon become somebody

     

    You let me know that you are here for me

    And forever we will always defend each other.

     

    You are the maker of who I am.

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    IzzyGumbo commented on You are the maker of who I am

    10-11-2009

    Well done Poet, this is well written and very inspirational. I'll be reading more :)
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    almonord1990

    10/11/2009

    THANK YOU FRIEND

    Charlie23 commented on You are the maker of who I am

    10-10-2009

    This is very well written, almonord! I find it spiritual and inspirational!
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    Starhawk commented on You are the maker of who I am

    10-06-2009

    It's always good to have at least one close friend. keep writing.
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    almonord1990

    10/06/2009

    thank you

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