Don't forget about the love

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    Don't forget about the love

    I stand before you guilty

    And I’m begging for your mercy.

     

    How can I be for given?

    I am truly sorry.

     

    And I know that I broke your heart

    But in spite of all I’ve done, I need for you to still love me.

     

    I only need to ask that forget about the past

    I want to make this right so that our relationship can last.

     

    If it helps I can remind you of all the good times we have had 

    And shared together.

     

    So please take my hand

    And let me know while I’m on one knee

    That I am still your man.

     

    You don’t have to forget about the pain that I put you through

    But i don’t want you to forget about the love that we have been through.

    All i ask and need for you to tell me is that you want forget about the love.

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    Doninha commented on Don't forget about the love

    10-11-2009

    Beware of overly harsh critics! In my opinion, you are not missing any words, and you are certainly paying attention! We experience each other's poems so differently! I easily understand that you mean won't instead of want in the last line. I really appreciate your phrasing and I continue to imagine your poems as songs. As you dig deeper, you can surprise yourself with your written expressions!
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    almonord1990

    10/11/2009

    well to tell you the truth, i did started off as writing songs but realized songs are poems.Thank you!!

    Stryx commented on Don't forget about the love

    10-11-2009

    I'm sorry, friend - this is certainly heart felt, but not that good of an appeal. Missing words, means you aren't paying attention. Slow down.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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