Father and son

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    Father and son

    Like a river flowing into the ocean

    Is just like father and son

     

    They Bond with each other

    Hanging onto each other shoulder

     

    It’s a wonderful sight to see

     

    I love my father

    But my father and I are not close

     

    He left us one morning

    And now he’s out in the streets

     

    Without a stable home

     It’s a terrible place to be

     

    My father if you can hear me

    I want you to know that you left me

     

    It’s a sad world to live without a father

     

    But I went beyond and looked even higher

    For the man that created me

     

    Jesus is my father

    And for him one day I will soon be higher

    In a place beyond this world

     

    Heaven is a home where my father lives

    And I will soon one day join him

     

    Whenever he decides to call me

     

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    Starhawk commented on Father and son

    10-06-2009

    Please read 'Love is My Shepherd I shall not want' it was inspired by your thoughts in this poem, so please accept it as a gift of the Spirit to you.
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    almonord1990

    10/06/2009

    thank you

    MIKE3447 commented on Father and son

    10-04-2009

    THIS IS VERY TOUCHING, DO TO THE FACT THAT WE ALL LIVE WITHOUT A FATHER IN OUR LIFE. WORSHIP THIS PIECE AND GET IT OUT THERE TO ALL THOSE INDIVIDUALS THAT THINK THEY DO NOT HAVE A FATHER. GREAT JOB MICHAEL.
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