Using You

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    Using You

    Me and you be stuck together like glue

     

    I get so tired of seeing you that my skin turns blue

     

    Sometimes I just want to hit you with a muddy shoe

     

    Being around you makes me catch the flue

     

    I swear I’m through…..

     

    I wonder would you leave if I scare you by saying BOO!

     

    But I guess I want sense you always buy me things that are new

     

    Therefore I will always stay with you until you find out that I don’t need you

     

    I’m telling you I’m through…..

     

    I played you so hard over the years which you never had a clue

     

    You even gave me most of your pay checks which I never asked you

     

    Girl I just want you to realize I’m only using you

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    Chaos128 commented on Using You

    10-20-2009

    Familiarity breeds contempt, as the saying goes, but this here is industrial strength. I guess it's better to make things plain but you might want to drop a couple of lumps of sugar in that battery acid, brother.
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    almonord1990

    10/27/2009

    OK THANKS

    SecretPanda8491 commented on Using You

    10-11-2009

    If this is true I feel sorry for you, and for her. I know how it feels to be used. Its great to put your thoughts on paper.... now show it to her. Keep expressing yourself .... it helps.
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    MIKE3447 commented on Using You

    10-04-2009

    I FIND THIS TO BE VERY FUNNY . KEEP HAVING FUN WITH YOUR WORK
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    Stryx commented on Using You

    10-04-2009

    Sorry, my friend - rhyming last words in consecutive lines AIN'T poetry.
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    SecretPanda8491

    10/11/2009

    not sure if I totally agree with that Stryx .... I think alot depends on the story and how it is written

    MsKrystle commented on Using You

    06-09-2009

    Wow, I hope this isnt how you really are; but then again you cant blame a man for using a woman if she allows it. Some parts I found a bit amusing. Overall its a good poem
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    almonord1990

    10/04/2009

    NO WAY I WANT NEVER USE A FEMALE. I LET THEM USE ME. AND THINGS LIKE THIS JUST COME TO MIND BECAUSE IT HAPPENS EVERYDAY. JUST ON HERE TRYING TO GET A DEAL AND GET PUBULISHED. GOT ALLOT MORE COMING SOON.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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