Trembling Flames Licked Clean

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    Trembling Flames Licked Clean

     Who is not enamored by your complex ways
    Who can stand in your presence
    Capture for us the comeliness of rebirth
    Take us to the meadow of downy softness
    Pluck notes from our heartbeats
    Designing weeping pieces of flowing art
    Like a symphony conductor bring us powerfully to the barren knees of our comprehension
    As we run in the fields of your vision
    Bend us like blades of grass to sway as living divine chants
    Squeeze the movements of waters
    To wring honey from our ripened souls
    Pour us like salve on merciless longing heat
    Affix the seal of your love upon our lips
    As we sing the bounty of grace you enfold
    Sup with the hungry longings that is our lot
    The sphere of your light wraps the seeking heart
    In the glories of your unrelenting beauty
    Struck by the range of your many voices
    I am left to resound in pleasurable sighs
    At your quality of perception and penetration
    The trumpet of loves warmest cloak
    Blazes like trembling flames licked clean to seek

    Graceladymn 9/2/09

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    soulwriter commented on Trembling Flames Licked Clean

    09-02-2009

    Now that is what I am talking about - pure poetry,,, at its finest. Drawing the reader in so near that the fires of passion can be felt radiating upon the minds skin. This piece takes life and as the pulse quickens, a deep breath is held, with all is released - there is satisfaction left lingering. 10!
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    graceladymn

    09/10/2009

    Thank you, it was heartfelt communion.

    Tempy commented on Trembling Flames Licked Clean

    09-02-2009

    I am left to resound in pleasurable sighs At your quality of perception and penetration. i like it you have used phrases that have more than drawn vividly beauty in understanding penetrating break throughs keep it up take care .
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    graceladymn

    09/10/2009

    Thank you for reading and commenting.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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