Poured

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  • Devotion

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    Poured

     Cherished you are in my heart of hearts
    Could I but show the delight I find in your presence
    I would ignite in the brightest light
    Radiating from my soul to encompass your beauty
    Touching every aspect of your soul loveliness
    It would expand to flow by a pump in a deep well
    To wash over you in gentle waves of heavens touch
    Renewing the parts of you discouraged and distressed
    Alone and distanced from me
    I love you in the meditation we partake of together
    Sitting palm to palm, knee to knee as the figure 8 flows between
    Allowing the energies to align as one thought
    One of wanting to bestow loves gift on one another
    In purest intent of touching each section of need within each other
    A mind, spirit, body, soul reach, that honors the completeness of giving and receiving
    Lifting the heart into action
    Of the feel of love, the outreaches, the inreaches, even highreaches to lowreaches
    That bring the soul to tears at the wonder of comeliness in human touch
    Unspoken but shown in the tending of devotion in skimming the container of a spark so divine
    That causes our breaths to briefly still as we lean into the sounds of unseen visions
    In this I enfold you, the essence of my being
    Letting gentleness have its way

    Graceladymn 9/12/09

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    Tempy commented on Poured

    09-12-2009

    this makes me cry cos i want someone to be nice right now :(
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    graceladymn

    09/13/2009

    Hugs there is goodness still in the world, it'll be okay, let the tears flow.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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