Splendid Raindrops

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    Splendid Raindrops

     Splendid raindrops freely fall
    Wash upon the graves of song
    Take from us the fleeting calls
    Until again the hearts are strong

    Capture the moonbeams bending rays
    Soak free the stains of blistered skin
    Clear the confusions from this maze
    Flood the desert of woes therein

    Anchor the nuance of birth renewal
    Cleanse the mind-thoughts hidden guile
    Parched souls thirsty, liquid spiritual jewel
    Brush this landscape of weathered style

    Take what is and free this wish
    Sent to surmount all obstacles with trials
    To prepare in the cool moisture of loves naked kiss
    Adrift the mountains will cease the fluid denials

    Uncensored let the music flow into the crystal caverns
    To follow the secret rounding passages to the heated core
    Where waterfalls of crystal prisms unquestionably discerns
    All that hearts of divine soul-love surely quest for

    Graceladymn 9/29/09

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    romina983 commented on Splendid Raindrops

    10-07-2009

    once again i am blown away by your talent! you are truly a precious gift in poetry world!great work!you dont write the words you sing them!
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    graceladymn

    10/08/2009

    I am glad you like this Romina, I appreciate you reading and commenting.

    dancinghawk commented on Splendid Raindrops

    10-02-2009

    i grew up in the desert and have a special affinity with and appreciation for the rain drops that are so precious, every one ... a lovely meditation on the cleansing effects of nature all around us ... thx for the post!
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    graceladymn

    10/02/2009

    Thank you for reading and leaving behind a thoughtful comment. Water is life and change is fluid, when energies need to disperse or alter the field, the potential of life change (water + alteration)comes through liquid addressment, that leaves room for the unseen changes desiring to come alongside what is already known if they so desire. When we speak to bring something forward we must yet give it room to manifest as it needs too, yet calling it forth to be.

    queenrosered commented on Splendid Raindrops

    10-02-2009

    This is a beautifully written work of art. The tender and wistful phrasing is delicious and imagary most delightful! I totally appreciate works such as this! Thanks for sharing your gift with others! Rose. :)
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    graceladymn

    10/02/2009

    Thank you Rose for reading this and commenting. The energies needed to shift.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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