Thunder Falls

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  • Life
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  • Confusion
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  • Political

    Poem Commentary

    Political commentary, 'nuff said.

    Thunder Falls

     Thunder falls
    And Angels crash
    While those in doubt
    Clean up the trash

    Words unspoken & wars unseen
    Mighty gods in bloody towers
    Fill the spaces in between
    And there reigns purple majesty
    Mere outcasts of their travesty

    Snapping jaws drip blue, white, red
    Shadows eat their silohoutes
    Until at last the beast is fed
    Fow awhile it's hunger calmed
    With 'we the people'
    Still in it's palm

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    FadingFebruary commented on Thunder Falls

    09-22-2010

    Awesome. Thought provoking and unique, and the meaning is slowly shown through the whole poem. The first stanza definately catches the readers' attention too. :] P.S. "SerenityWintirs" is also a pretty name.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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