Talk to Me

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    Quiet men, i love one. He is what he is, there is no changing that. I wish sometimes he could win the fight inside you see, and finally talk to me.....

    Talk to Me

    There was a time it was f! that noise
    then there was yelling at the boys
    an alcoholic cacophany
    we put the fun in dysfunctionality.

    Only a wish for peace and quiet
    then it was there
    and there was you
    and quiet you could do.

    I had scars, horrors to tell
    i needed to cry and scream and yell.
    A listener you turned out to be.
    A perfect friend for me.

    I have talked it through
    and here are you
    quiet in your independence
    but nothing to say hence.

    I see your horrors now
    and wish for you to take a turn
    and talk it through and learn
    how healing it can be to let it out you see.
    Please, just talk to me.

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    cutbanksam commented on Talk to Me

    02-27-2012

    The mother of one of my children never talks. I mean never!! It drove me so crazy I just gave up trying to communicate with her and told her that if she wouldn't talk I wouldn't try by either calling or seeing her again. We do share a 38 daughter though. When one is so silent I think something mental is going on up there. It ain't natural nor agreeable to others. Even my mother gave up trying to talk to her.
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    Tempestlady

    03/31/2012

    Eventually it is like being alone anytime you are with them...sux

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Talk to Me

    11-08-2011

    I like how you wrote this poem and how you made it come together with life and conviction.
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    Tempestlady

    11/15/2011

    This one was somewhat painful to write because a very special person in my life is a very quiet soul and this makes me more restless than usual.....LOL.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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