sacrosanct

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  • marxred
  • Just completed my new collection of poems, "Time Machine", a collections of Rock Ballads to set your own music to.

sacrosanct

in her cap and gown
she covered solid ground
and didn't know where it would all lead
the sages came and went
and said that she was heaven sent
and sometimes she would believe

G-d was there, G-d was not
as she laid down to take a second shot
and the sages prayed for her soul
they washed her with their handsome words
they baptized her and those hidden wounds
as she moaned out sacred rock and roll

her angels sang of warmth
her angels sang of warning
but morning arrived just the same
the rain came down in shudders
and she thought of all the others
that had kept her warm but always in pain

when the four of them awoke
feeling rich but almost broke
happy to have been there and back
they sighed like dreaming cats
and everyone laughed and imagined that
the rain was waiting like the guy in the cab


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HarverTomsson commented on sacrosanct

07-13-2009

you have left ambiguous clues, too many to unravel, cap and gown- a graduate, an expectant mother, a surgeon, or a woman in for surgery? and everything else stems from there. I'm opting for a successful surgery celebrated. But then, I was never there....

marxred

11/13/2009

first of all, i apologize for the delayed response. thank you for your comments. i enjoy your visions that the poem offered you. i can see them all too. thanks

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

marxred’s Poems (32)

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No Deadlines To Keep 0
Into The Passport Silences 0
73/23 Blues 0
Daddy Was A Rambler 0
Oh Whiskey 0
Gospel Plow 0
Sacrosanct 0
Baby's Time Machine 0
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blues of saint anthony 4
and here we are 3
jazz is prayer 2
thanks 2
you do blues 2
wings within wheels 2
fleeting dance 2
on yom kippur night 1
remembering: 1am 4
in for it 1
work left undone 2
humoresque 2
rapidly losing the dream 1
raven blues 3
coffee with enstein 2
for the moon 2
the party 1
sacrosanct 1
just like a meat cleaver 3
love again as strangers 0
the snow on her daffodils 6
jazz 8 1