fleeting dance

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    • Just completed my new collection of poems, "Time Machine", a collections of Rock Ballads to set your own music to.

    fleeting dance

     life is temporary
    in this sukkot
    in this body
    this shell

    this heaven and hell
    lost in love
    found in hate
    all part of this fleeting
    dance

    give me coffee and smoke
    and your hand
    we will waltz
    in the rain
    dancing naked again

    give me sanity and pain
    and the prophesy of your love
    that tender caress
    our own blessedness
    waltzing with you
    naked in the rain

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    am2anangel commented on fleeting dance

    11-07-2009

    Loved it; simple yet riveting. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. dancing in the rain such pure bliss.
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    marxred

    11/08/2009

    and thank you for your very nice compliment. hope all is well with you and yours.

    SavVySam commented on fleeting dance

    10-27-2009

    This is a touching and tender thing of simple poetic beauty! What else is there, but to dance. Very nice- Thank you!
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    marxred

    11/06/2009

    thank you for your kind words! sorry it took me so long to read them. laughter, tears, waltzing....life.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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