out of life
surrealand
supposed
struck
and exposed
lactating mind
of
soft frost climbing
screaming
unwinding
and
for real
out of life
1 Comments
Tags: Lost Love
and
supposed
struck
and exposed
lactating mind
of
soft frost climbing
screaming
unwinding
and
for real
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abbadejuju commented on out of life
06-10-2009
- light and bouncing simple yet detailed and descriptive flows. nice. won't to stop here but the forced minimum says otherwise.
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