the choice

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    the choice

     she means no harm
    it's a split second reaction
    and love doesn't come
    through doors open wide-
    it sneaks in
    and soaks in
    a flash and a flicker
    it leaks in
    and falls short-
    a fleeting deposition
    of fight or flight-
    she risks stability
    but feels the breeze
    she chooses havoc
    and seeks control of certainties-
    and when she falls
    she aches with solitude
    and weeps for hope

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    lorenzo commented on the choice

    11-17-2010

    and this poem aches with beauty.......................
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    simplypeace

    12/02/2010

    thank you so much! :)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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