dead girls are easy

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    dead girls are easy
    i lie at this gate called beautiful
    black mercy floats above me
    my chest rises at your call
    i did not ask for you
    yet i suffer at your hands
    the sound of your voice controls me
    and in your eyes i am dead
    i am made to bleed

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    charmlessman2d commented on dead girls are easy

    03-23-2010

    love love love your title. sounded cynical and a little evil with a touch of playfullness. come to find your poem is short sweet, and hits straight to the gut. goodjob.!
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    Qualin commented on dead girls are easy

    03-18-2010

    AGAIN YOU ARE WHAT YOU ARE......................................QUALIN
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    wagus commented on dead girls are easy

    06-10-2009

    Like the way you wrote this 'i' not 'I' and no periods or commas in it.. yet it still easy to read and fits mood title puts one in... if anyone says ya need to change i to I and add periods commas don't leave it like is... early poets just gotted down their poems then put the stops starts effects in when read to folks who couldn't read themselves... so let reader put their effects in feel it for themselves...wagus
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    HarverTomsson commented on dead girls are easy

    05-23-2009

    Your irony is not lost on me. Death is never an act of true mercy. Exsanguination is not how love grows. Simple, and evocative. Good write.
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    freind commented on dead girls are easy

    05-03-2009

    wow very nice just trying to pitcher that very good
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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