Love is so tender

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Love is so tender

 
I watch you as you sleep, dreaming your sleepless dreams
I hold you in my arms as you cry away the pain.
I am there for you no matter what the cost.
I give myself over to you my love.
I feel your pain ,
I feel the sorrow behind those eyes.
With the ach of my heart. 
I know only time will tell as you deal with your pain. 

Its all Fresh and New. I feel it deep down inside. 
I cry with you for the lost of the one we all loved. 
To turn the hands of time to give over to the one above. 

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Teardrops commented on Love is so tender

05-15-2010

When death comes knocking to be there just to hold them is sometimes all you can do . But it is the love you give them that will last no matter what . Great poem Marie

BikemanRJ commented on Love is so tender

04-27-2010

"I am there for you no matter what the cost" A VERY POWERFUL LINE A beautiful example of unconditional love. The love and sadness because of a loss and your devotion to the one you have penned this for is unmeasurable. The emotions that you have shown in this poem make this a very good poem. God Bless Randy

thecross commented on Love is so tender

04-27-2010

Nice emotional write, being there for the one you love during a tough time, well done.

mountainlady

04/27/2010

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To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

mountainlady’s Poems (14)

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feel my pain 3
Unseen Fear 4
Love is so tender 4
A gift 2
Simple Breed 6
missing you 4
Fields Of Green For my love 6
A Vow of undieing Love 2
only if you knew 3
winter nights 0
In your Arms 0
mountain blue 2
thinking of you 1
Life of a mad white woman 1