Let Me Keep On Loving You

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    Let Me Keep On Loving You



    Let me keep on loving you.
    There’s nothing more than I can say.
    There’s nothing more than I can do.
    Let me keep on loving you.

    Let me keep on loving you.
    Let me lay down by your side.
    Let me share all of your dreams.
    And all the feelings that you hide.

    Let me keep on loving you.
    There’s nothing left for me to do.
    There’s nothing left for me to say.
    I can't help but feel this way.

    Let me keep on loving you.
    And everywhere you want to go.
    And everything you want to do.
    Let me keep on loving you..

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    Artie commented on Let Me Keep On Loving You

    11-29-2009

    I'm reminded of that camera ad - "So advanced, it's simple" - this reads so simple and smooth, yet the message is that of total devotion. 10
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    captaininsight

    11/30/2009

    Artie, you've been so kind . I look forward to exploring your work tomorrow. Im of to bed for now , thanks friend

    SavVySam commented on Let Me Keep On Loving You

    08-31-2009

    All anyone could ever wish for is that someone will keep on loving them. Sensitive and beautiful.
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    captaininsight

    09/05/2009

    Thank You SavySam, you can give that song a listen at http://www.facebook.com/home.php?#/pages/DISPOSABLE-SOCIETY/136170100244?ref=mf , I turned it into a poem .

    Charlie23 commented on Let Me Keep On Loving You

    08-23-2009

    This is sweet, so different from the others you've posted! I like it as well.
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    captaininsight

    08/26/2009

    Again Thank you , I'm not always morose.

    dahlusion commented on Let Me Keep On Loving You

    03-10-2009

    This is a poetic gem, a master piece of simple beauty.
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    captaininsight

    06/05/2009

    dahlusion, thank you for reading my stuff, it makes it worth writing.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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