My Blood Runs In The Sand

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    My Blood Runs In The Sand
    My darling Rosalita
    The time has just come
    My darling Rosalita
    The day is near done
    Now my time is at hand
    And now I understand
    My Rosalita

    My darling Rosalita
    Where are you now?
    My darling Rosalita
    If I could reach you somehow
    The words I could not find
    When you were truly mine
    My Rosalita

    My darling Rosalita
    The bullet sits deep
    My darling Rosalita
    It’s next to my heart
    My blood runs in the sand
    And now I understand
    My Rosalita

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    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on My Blood Runs In The Sand

    06-20-2010

    I love the words "my blood runs in the sand". The title caught my eye......*click*......A beautifully terrible poem about war. I truly felt this one. Great work. --Natalie.
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    captaininsight

    08/29/2010

    again Natalie I am sorry it's been so long. Thank you so very much. I shall read you soon.

    cmlestrade commented on My Blood Runs In The Sand

    09-20-2009

    Too little to late. I almost wish you could pick up the phone and call her. You write of war, I tried with crimson sands but I have not been near war so I don't know the reality, fear or any of the real emotions connected with battle. You men who defend these shores are owed a great debt from the rest of us.
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    captaininsight

    09/20/2009

    This one hurts.

    swashington commented on My Blood Runs In The Sand

    09-14-2009

    You bring to life you pains and the reality that you have see. thank you for keep me in touch.
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    captaininsight

    12/14/2009

    Thanks For Reading it

    tenderpoison commented on My Blood Runs In The Sand

    06-06-2009

    the moment of clear-sightedness...often only attained when rectifying action is become impossible...very well written.
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    captaininsight

    06/12/2009

    so true, so true.

    captaininsight

    07/20/2009

    Indeed , well said "Tender", is it? I enjoy your work. Thank You , Captaininsight

    jadienblu commented on My Blood Runs In The Sand

    05-18-2009

    beauty in words i feel this one and i believe it to be near Poe....
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    captaininsight

    06/05/2009

    Jadienblu, I didn't get your full comment on this one. Some glich or something , but thank you for reading my stuff. It makes it worth writing.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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