I will Visit You Tonight.

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    I will Visit You Tonight.


    I will visit you tonight.

    I open my lattice window to let in the dampened moonlight.

    Beneath me , all is quiet and dark green .

    I look up and push hard the wind beneath my wings .

    The hole in the clouds is my doorway.

    Now, with the moon on my back, I see my silhouette ,
    gliding across the white sea of midnight clouds.

    With out a thought, with only one thought,
    My senses guide me to you.

    The small of your neck beckons me.

    The smell of your hair , the soft pale curve of your breast.

    Dare not open your eyes.

    Let just me , gaze upon you.

    I breath you in, deeply.

    Place my lips just so,
    My heart pounds now.
    It's time,
    I go.

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    charmlessman2d commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    08-03-2011

    lovely choice of vocabulary brother. I felt the passion and yearning to visit this particular girl. The nighttime bug i call it. Great work man. excited to read more from you. clever lyricist.
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    freezspirit commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    12-31-2010

    This poem is quite lovely! I knew a captain once, this brought me to a special place from days gone by, thank you for posting this one,,it is very special to me. freezspirit, Blessings
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    kdarcy commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    08-01-2010

    Nice write with some great images, thought it a bit short when it ended, lol
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    captaininsight

    08/29/2010

    Thank you , I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.

    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    06-20-2010

    I just love the imagery in this piece. I kept wanting more as the words unfolded. Another great write. --Natalie.
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    captaininsight

    08/29/2010

    Thank you , I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.

    Juliez commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    05-04-2010

    I think you've visited with me a time or two! (LOL) ...didn't have to open my eyes to know it was you! What a great poem!
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