HELL WILL BE WAITING

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    HELL WILL BE WAITING

    Hell will be waiting

    You’ve still plenty of time

    To dredge the blackened pit

    Of your dark and tainted mind

    Dreaming of wicked ways

    To spread your evil slime.

     

    The flickering of pleasure

    From the depths of hooded eyes

    As you trail your fingers lightly

    Down the hollow of her spine

    You recognize the signals

    She’s falling for your lies.

     

    Stop! I want to scream

    Don’t let him take your soul

    He’ll blind you with his smile

    Submerge you in his charm

    Quickly lure you in his web

    In his most convincing role.

     

    You predator of the night

    Stalking innocence for prey

    Feeding your perverse desires

    Debauchery your game

    Exhilaration from inflicting pain

    Triumphant you’ve had your way.

     

    Hell’s demons will be waiting

    They’ll vivisect your soul

    Claw apart your venomous mind

    Reap the evil that you’ve sowed

    Victim of your own deception

    For eternity pay your toll.

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    Hiporlacking commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

    11-17-2010

    I read it as if you were talking about a womanizer. One who is possibly even a sociopath.Charming the ladies just to have his way. My memory might fail me but the song "Dandy" by the Kinks comes to mind. After reading the other comments I don't think that's what you meant...but you've portrayed a dark future for whoever it's about quite well.
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    julieannetx

    11/18/2010

    You are right...It was written about a womanizer...one why preys on young innocent girls...sociopath...psychopath it can really be applied to any type predator

    Marsink commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

    11-17-2010

    Distorted and steamy images boil in a cauldron of dark judgment: and that's just the first entree! A tone of retribution washes over your skillful work! Great meter and rhyme to push this toward a frantic retort! Applause building!!
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    julieannetx

    11/18/2010

    Thank you for such kind compliments. I am honored.

    Kanicki commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

    11-16-2010

    JuliaAnne - this is an excellent write. As I read it I can't help but think about child predators; the life time of pain they inflict on the innocent. Peace, Light and Love
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    julieannetx

    11/17/2010

    You are right it is about wicked evil people who prey on the innocent. Thanks for the kind words. Julie

    JadedJezzabel commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

    11-16-2010

    intense message of demonic possesion....could be actual demon or possibly a man.......or a new habit ne has picked up.........good poetry.
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    julieannetx

    11/18/2010

    Thank you!

    kdarcy commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

    10-31-2010

    Very well done, loved your choice of words. The message was clear, nice write ... I like your style, be well k
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    julieannetx

    11/01/2010

    Thanks so much...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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