Fireside Passion :: UnworthyFather :: Original Poetry

Fireside Passion

The sweet taste of you
Is upon my lips
As I lay you down
On velvety spread
Before a raging fire

I hear your gasps
As I feather your skin
With soft kisses
While I slowly ease
You into nakedness

Fire cackles in delight
And candles flicker
In the dimness of
A shadowy room
Filled with your scent

Your skin is burning
To the touch, your eyes
Filled with longing, pleading
Your whispered voice
Begs me to enter

And still I wait...
And still I wait...

My lips are on molten flesh
Sweat beads your brow
And yet you shiver
As I caress your body
With a gentle tongue

Your eyes are mere slits
Closed against the raging
Inferno that threatens
To consume your being
From the inside out

You open yourself to me
Pleading, then demanding
That I enter you, fill you
Your need is palpable
I can resist no longer

Our bodies merge together
Each feeding the other
Each lost to the other
As we crescendo together
We kiss and fall asleep...

A long time later,
I feel you nibble my ear...

First time to write Free Verse:
Marcus Lewis
6/13/2009

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Beautiful1974 commented on Fireside Passion 07-14-2009: I thought only women could write like that. I stand corrected. Good use of descriptive language and great flow.; Reply to Comment

UnworthyFather 07/14/2009: LOL...thanks, Beautiful. Glad you enjoyed. Marcus

soulwriter commented on Fireside Passion 07-12-2009: Your first time was the right time, looks like you waited waited until you could resist no longer... great right. Free verse is the source of my soulful writing. You have found a way for new expression and your love that you wrote this about must be smoldering! 10; Reply to Comment

soulwriter 07/12/2009: Great write - I must be sleep deprived, however your piece is enough to awake anyone.

UnworthyFather 07/12/2009: Thank you very much, Soulwriter. I deeply appreciate you kind words.

Heartfelt commented on Fireside Passion 07-12-2009: It reminds me of my ex.. That's bad, but this poem is exceptional! Such passion and feeling. I love it. Great write, my friend. 10.; Reply to Comment

UnworthyFather 07/12/2009: Thank you, Heartfelt, for your very kind words, and friendship.

BooTz commented on Fireside Passion 06-29-2009: very sweet&sensual. i can see the love & passion emitting off this poem. very well done; Reply to Comment

UnworthyFather 06/29/2009: Thank you very much, BooTz. Your words are very much appreciated.

Jay690P commented on Fireside Passion 06-21-2009: It's really hard to write graphically sensual poetry the works, but damned if you haven't done it! I particularly admire the use of fire and fire-images to stand for passion. Also, though the verse may be "blank," it's well held together by consistent rhythms. Good work!; Reply to Comment

UnworthyFather 06/21/2009: Thank you very much, Jay690P for your very kind words.

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