Weep

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    Weep

     Sitting here feeling the pain.....................................
    Wiping away the tears as they fall like rain.
    My heart hurts deep inside of me
    I can't let go of the past....... I can't be free!
    My mind is racing with things from the past
    I keep asking myself, How much longer can I last?
    Words that where left unspoken...... actions left undone.
    Pain so deep...... All I want to do is run!
    But who can I run to? There is no one there!
    They have all left me.... No one cares!
    If I could just lay down and go to sleep..... maybe over my body someone else will weep.

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    Makuei commented on Weep

    02-23-2010

    I like it where it says, words and actions left undone.
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    GucciGurl

    02/25/2010

    Thank u. It is said to leave those 2 things undone no matter how the person goes. Keep reading I have been putton new things everyday

    kage commented on Weep

    02-12-2010

    just a darn good poem i like it the story is great and the words do it well
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    GucciGurl

    02/12/2010

    Thank you so much. So sad it feels so true.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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