I Can't Anymore

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    I Can't Anymore

    Time has passed I can't feel you anymore. I can't smell the cologone I gave you on the teddy bear you gave me. I can't remember what it sounds like to hear you whisper my name and how sexy I am.
    I close my eyes and try to see your smile, but I can not!
    I can't feel you pull me close to you at night as if you would think that I was going to get out of bed and not return.
    I  can't hear your laughter or the way it sounded when you would try to sing, and it was off key.
    But the things I can hear is the loneliness without you. I can hear my heart breaking everytime I think of you.
    I can hear my tears hit the pillow at night when I try to sleep . I can still hear our favorite song"Kiss me on the phone" playing in my head.
    I can still hear the anger in your voice when you said it was over.
    I can always hear when you said that last "Goodbye".

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    fawndesno10 commented on I Can't Anymore

    07-03-2009

    I gues alls i can say to that is that sometimes goodbye is the only way. good job on your poem.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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