The Spider's Web

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    The Spider's Web

     You are the spider.......... I am your prey
    You have spun your web around me and I can't get away.
    I struggle to be released from your hold, but everytime I do my body gets weak and my blood runs cold.
    Although your web pulls me tight, I need your love, so I do not fight.
    I allow you to suck my body dry of all the real things it needs to grow inside.
    I ask myself " How do I set myself free? Will I ever be whole again?
    Is there even a "ME"?

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    FLAWLES commented on The Spider's Web

    09-03-2010

    You are very creative with you feelings. You're good girl. Sometimes you gotta spin your web first.
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    GucciGurl

    09/11/2010

    NOW FRIEND U KNOW THIS A WOMEN THAT WAS HURTIN DEEPLY AT THAT TIME....I DID FIND LOVE AGAIN...NOT THE SAME ...BUT MY HEART DID HEAL

    ginga commented on The Spider's Web

    02-15-2010

    gucci, There is so much here that mirrors life and alludes to how humans are used by leeches who try and take control. I liked how you postured the spider as the controller. ginga
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    GucciGurl

    02/15/2010

    Thanxs. The spider always wants to control but read the last one I just posted called It's Time.

    cliftondurant commented on The Spider's Web

    02-15-2010

    i love it gucci well written short but sweet good job
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    GucciGurl

    02/15/2010

    Thanxs. To bad it had to happen to write it.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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