Wake Me When it's over

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    Wake Me When it's over
    I feel as if I am dreaming and my deep inside Im screaming! The news came today, it's my brother Wade, he has cancer and soon will pass away. My body went weak , my heart went numb, although I knew it would someday come.
    I can't image him cold as stone. I don't want him to die! I don't want him to go home! My parent's raised all 8 of us to be close. They told us when they where gone we must be there for one another.. But I don't want him to die! I can't lose my brother! So just let me go to sleep till it's all over! I just can't take the pain! Im in the medical field but I can't help him, it's making me insane!
    They say we have to show strength not to let im see us weak. But the only way I know how to do this is to let me go to sleep!
    Wake me when it's over, when he is long gone. Wake me when he is burried and they have played his last song! Wake when his body is cold and under ground. Wake me when there is no more pain around!

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    JCKasper commented on Wake Me When it's over

    10-12-2009

    Extremely expressive emotions .............. You convey a message that is consuming and powerful. I can relate all too well!
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    preshusstones commented on Wake Me When it's over

    06-23-2009

    Your poems are really heart felt, keep doing what you are doing I am enjoying your poems I really feel them
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    FLAWLES commented on Wake Me When it's over

    06-15-2009

    If we could sleep away our pain, we would never know when we feel good. Prince said, "all good things they say, never last". So, if we want to experience life, we have to take the good with the bad.
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    CraigStyle commented on Wake Me When it's over

    06-05-2009

    I didn't want to lose my Mother! I didn't want her to die! I miss her like no one. I love her like no one. I'm awake and the pain continues.... Yes girl I feel you
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    GucciGurl

    06/08/2009

    Thank you so much 4 your comments. My mother also died of cancer when she was only 52. It was very hard to let go. I held in my emotions for along time till I could not take it anymore. Almost went crazy. Not sure how to handle this one. Its not fair!

    Wonxxtnz commented on Wake Me When it's over

    05-14-2009

    poem sux... its so sad i like understand or recognize the angst all to well. but i gave it an eight because its good. i just didnt wanto be reminded of sad. thats was from a time when i got the notion to celebrate death on the count of the life that was live & eternity... life by definition is eternal ....
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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