UNTILTED

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    ‹jadienblu› DEATH SURGES THROUGH MY SOUL FRANTICALLY CRYING OUT, A COLD HARSH BREATH SPEAKS TO ME....ALL THIS IN ONE MOMENT OF CALMNESS AND DARKNESS .I AWAKEN FROM THIS NUMB PAINFUL WORLD AND REALIZE I NEVER WAS YET ALWAYS HAVE BENN IN SANE..THE DIMENSION I AM IN IS FAR FROM REALITY AND BEYOND THE IMAGINATION OF A VAST MINDED MORTAL

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    Michael87024 commented on UNTILTED

    01-14-2010

    This response is directed AT dahlusion, first, you must have NEVER been victim to physical, mental and emotional abuse. We, Sarah and I as well as millions I expect, have created our own "worlds" to escape SOMEWHERE to get away from it. How dare you chastise someone for something that IS US. I would hope that you at least take that to heart. Sarah, you are very RAW, but I like that you write your mind so vivdly. Color is release.
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    jadienblu

    09/04/2012

    I thank you so deeply

    dahlusion commented on UNTILTED

    03-09-2009

    No I don't rate and run without a comment. First, check your spelling. Second, if your world is painful, remember, it was created by you and only you. If you want love then you need to love unconditionally everything in existence.
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    fastdetailer commented on UNTILTED

    01-30-2009

    The you pasion you display is beutiful,bravo!!
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    lovethoseclones commented on UNTILTED

    01-27-2009

    not bad!!! Do those insane know they are?
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    captaininsight commented on UNTILTED

    01-25-2009

    ...just as undefinable. You OK?
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