Sanction

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    Sanction


    she dances alone in a twilighted gown embellished in wasted dreams...

    hers eyes alone have seen such malice as to crash down the mascaraed...

    the walls have fallen ,leaving her to tear at the seems...

    the rubble acts as souvenirs to remind her of the dark parade ...

    "no ,i dont want to die..."in to the black she screams...

    but death creeps in, unignored, right into her good grace...

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    redbloodink commented on Sanction

    12-25-2009

    just speachless...................................... red
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    lonewolf commented on Sanction

    11-08-2009

    interesting little poem. i enjoyed it. looking forward to reading more.
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    Troubador commented on Sanction

    07-30-2009

    This is certainly better than wtf, You must have been having a bad day that day other than a couple of spelling errors. I really enjoyed the read and will read more of your work to see if you can surprize me once again.
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    jadienblu

    07/30/2009

    please do ...you'll find your one surprised dude....

    Solaris commented on Sanction

    07-29-2009

    deep i can feel it and the ever encroaching death is just a fantastic way to grasp the mind of the reader
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    Shadow70 commented on Sanction

    07-23-2009

    Very nice.. It really draws a vivid picture...good work. I will read more of yours.
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