slideways on a heartstring...

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  • Devotion

    slideways on a heartstring...

    does time wear thin on
    your souls outer core
    does your heart refrain
    or does it want more?

    you came to me in a dreamscape ,wearing stone fire blue

    i couldn't see your face
    yet i knew it was you

    in the dark you were
    calling for me to come
    i came to you head high
    and body all numb


    my poems are short .(and sweet)

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    redbloodink commented on slideways on a heartstring...

    12-22-2009

    nicely done.... nothing wrong with short writing.... some times few words are better then many...... ! 10 from me
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    na2011 commented on slideways on a heartstring...

    07-26-2009

    wow the flow or the poem was smooth and love the title great pic too
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    NayInLove commented on slideways on a heartstring...

    03-11-2009

    you have a lovely way with words!
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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