coming through in waves as she panics

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    coming through in waves as she panics
    blood surges and wine pleases me sweetly
    the pain rolls in and paves me over neatly
    i can get trough this for i know it is the end
    i cant say im ruined ,there is room to mend
    my eyes drip and my body does convulse
    deep within my viens my heart sends a mild pulse
    if tomorrow doesnt come for me well i hope you all know
    that the pain finally rooled over me and i feel no more

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    redbloodink commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-25-2009

    truly amazing........................................... red
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    monkyntz commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    05-18-2009

    beautifully painful keep up the good work
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    writerspassion commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    01-23-2009

    sometimes I wish the pain would just end. Very heartfelt for me
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    Phoenix9 commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-31-2008

    very nicely done
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    allenjermy commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-22-2008

    i like this one,short but very good. You are a true poet...Don Folks
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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