Unleash

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My poem of sadness and depression!

Unleash

I have unleased the feelings I've hid inside,
That have been burdening me for five years straight.
I let out my cries and all my deepest sighs,
As the tears roll, the thunder comes and darkens the mood.
 The secrets that were locked away come to the surface,
They turn my fown to neutral, as blood boils,
I grow angry in fear of what may be there.
My cries silenced and my anger slighted,
I crawl to my safe-haven by that corner,
So, dark I con't see,
So, creepy I hear things. 

I have unleashed the words I kept to myself,
I unleashed all that was neer shown.
I let go of the feelings of horror,
Because they bled out.
Through cuts on my wrist you see little specks,
Those specks tamed me until they died,
Now loose, I can tell the world how I felt:
When I was bullied, hurt, yelled at, and cursed at,
The things I've seen I can't unsee,
and the things I heard I can't unhear.
The things that happened can't not happen,
So, I unleash the feelings of grief and pain.
Utter disapointment leaving my lips.

I have unleashed all that I have kept inside,
all this time!

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Kingwebstar commented on Unleash

09-24-2012

Unleash is a wonderful poem I enjoyed it .It was so real and from the heart .I am so glad you wrote it.Write a poem giving yourself good advice and about how you are grateful to experience this so you can learn and not make the same mistakes.Then read it when you feel the same way and it will make you feel much better. Keep writing and Love ya Da Princess Love Da KinG ps.thanks for reading my work take your time cause I have alot and write 4or 5 poems a day sometimes more

poetryprincess

09/24/2012

Fine by me.... I enjoy seeing life from someone else's point of view... quite interesting. I gotta say though... your poems are deep.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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