Abandoned

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  • Abandonment

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    Not about me just wanted to express what happened to my friend

    Abandoned
    I wait......
    waiting.....
    Wait, but for what?
    Why wait to be abandoned?
    I was abandoned once by my friends,
    Never spoke to again.
    Now if thesaying is true
    My new friends should abandoned me too.
    So, why wait to be abandoned?
    Why wait to never be loved again?
    Why wait for that to happen all over again? 

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    Pocahantas commented on Abandoned

    09-27-2012

    Definately know what that's like. Only one of them apologized to me a year later.
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    poetryprincess

    09/27/2012

    yeah thts kinda what happens and no one apoligized to my new friend.... the whole school wouldn't tlk to her. then we became friends!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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