Rain of Tears

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    I wrote this poem because I am breaking
    down those doors that threw me off track
    and I am in lack of ability to tell someone
    without usig a poem to describe it.

    Rain of Tears

    The rain is pounding,
    The tears sounding.

    The way a rver is flooding,
    The tears coming.

    Then I... SCREAM...,
    Help me!

    I am drowning,
    In my own tears finding.

    I am down in the ground,
    Have I found,
    The correct sound!!!

    Tell me why,
    Before my head turns and I fly!!!!











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    Rhymer commented on Rain of Tears

    09-23-2010

    Short, easy to read, rhymes well and you paint a vivid picture with your words. Very good write for someone your age.
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    soccerchick556 commented on Rain of Tears

    09-23-2010

    good job i loved it and I know that I wish I could be lik u! :)
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    charles52 commented on Rain of Tears

    01-15-2010

    You certainly have talent for someone so young of age. Now you must check for spelling. Don't stop the reader because of a spelling error. But, again, I am very impressed with your style and pace. You are going to grow into a great poet. Charles
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    koolmom0 commented on Rain of Tears

    09-26-2009

    Excellent, you did a fine job, you have the makings of being a good writer. Koolmom
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    SEVEN commented on Rain of Tears

    09-25-2009

    Good write lil lady....keep the pen flowing....ur at a good age to start writing poetry....write about everything thats goes on in your life....I do...Its a good way to transform myself from this place we call Earth...My diary ...errr My journal is called Leaving Earth for good...
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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