Break up or get out

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    Poem Commentary

    Love what you love and live with what you live!

    Break up or get out

     I know who you are,
    So, why leave me with a scar?
    I understand what you do,
    So, why include me too?
    I love living with you,
    But not when you do what you do.
    I know, understand, and love you,
    But I won't when it is you!
    Because you scared me,
    With everything you are!
    Because you included me too,
    With everything you do!
    Becuase I love living with you,
    You know you can do what you do!
    But from now on,
    You can't walk all over me!

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    Kingwebstar commented on Break up or get out

    09-23-2012

    You are soooo strong just like me when I was little .I didn't truly understand how it made me much stronger until I was older.I felt alone and unloved .That is one of the things that encourages me to write and let my people know they are not alone.Would you rather have a KinG that has never been through poverty and has been rich their whole lives with both their parents and is only for self .Or one that has been through the worst and still tries to help other lives out the best way he knows how with poetry.You are a princess poetry needs you.I am here to help. If you let me . Awesome write by the way Love Da KinG
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    poetryprincess

    09/24/2012

    thx... and I have trust for u now just not as much as others have from me...yet. I just have been hurt in different ways! :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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