Parents

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Parents

Parents keep us from having fun,
Staying out of the sun.

They don't understand us,
They tell you not to fuss.

The mother is usally soft,
Mine doesn't even have a loft.

The father is usally the ruler,
Mine isn't even around so he can't even be cruler.

The grandparents are supposed to spoil you,
Mine are dead so what can they do?

Why??????

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angelchaser commented on Parents

01-10-2011

Honey, one thing you'll realize someday is that discipline means love. If your parents keep you from doing something they think may harm you in some way, it's because they love you and don't want you hurt. That said, I know parents can sometimes be overly strict. I don't know if that's the case for you or not. Just hold your head up and be a good person, I think that would be very easy for you to do. I'm so sorry you've lost your grandparents. Mine are all deceased as well, so i know the pain you've gone through there. I don't know the circumstances of why your father isn't in the picture, but I know he's a fool if he just up and left his little girl. If you ever want an adult to talk to about anything, feel free to drop me a note. I'm a good listener and I'll never judge you by anything you tell me. God bless you, honey.

poetryprincess

05/24/2011

Thanks, for understanding but the circumstances are quite dull. My father left for many reasons. Mainly because he did not want to get caught by the cops for not paying child support, ripping people off, etc. I also have a sis. Keep reading plz.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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