To Whom It May Concern

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    To Whom It May Concern

    You think your very wise
    Yes, you know alot of things
    You've been to the four corners
    And worn alot of rings

    You practice your religion
    And you know mine too
    You've taken what you wanted
    But the rest just wouldn't do

    You say you hurt nobody
    That may or may not be true
    You say there is no truth
    So do you even have a clue

    Yes, your very wise
    If only in your own eyes
    You think your very wise
    Though you've failed to see all the lies

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    Olan01 commented on To Whom It May Concern

    12-28-2010

    It is important to not let a person take from us our self worth when they leave, easier said than done. It sounds like you maintained you self worth, well said. love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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    SuSpence commented on To Whom It May Concern

    05-04-2010

    Wow amazing pax, memorable write. I think my ex actually screamed this at me when we broke up, word for word, haha, im just kidding. Seriously though, I thouroughly enjoyed this write. It was very powerful and truthful, and even emotional. -Spence
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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