To My Son

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    This poem is to my son... Whom I miss every day. I can't wait till I can hold him again and tell him how much I have missed him and How very much I Love Him!!!!

    To My Son

    When the rain falls down, and there's no one around,

    I weep for the sound of your laughter.

    In my time of need you were there for me, my angel, my friend.

    But now it seems you've gone from me.

    no longer here for me to wipe your tears.

    I would give my very life, my dying breath,

    just to see the very depths of your soul full eyes, that once had shined in to mine.

    I hear the eagles cry and am transported in time.

    When things were great and things were fun.

    Oh dear God, How I miss you Son.

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    carynontherhine commented on To My Son

    10-07-2010

    This read is beautiful! A tribute to your darling boy. I too have a write to my son with love. It is similar in writing. I love mine too oh so so much! I am comforted that someone else loves theirs this way also to do a poem about your feelings. I loved it. Ten plus from me! Hugz

    sunshine33710 commented on To My Son

    10-07-2010

    AWWWW! That was very nice, sweet, and sad. Very well done. I really like it. I hope that you cacn talk to your son soon. Your Friend, Donna aka Sunshine

    lonewolf commented on To My Son

    08-26-2010

    I have written a poem for my daughter, and have tried to write one for my son. after years of strain, we are finally beginning to mend fences. your poem here has touched me deeply and has given me great encouragement. for that i thank you.

    Krystle commented on To My Son

    02-17-2010

    I am amazed!! I love this poem sooo much! Very great write! I sense what you are feeling as I am reading this! Great job will be reading more of your work soon! Thanks for sharing. -Krystle

    Lolee commented on To My Son

    07-24-2009

    Oh, my goodness! I wrote one to my son too! My poem is called "Son, You Are Missed." I think... anyway, check it out. Nobody knows like another mother the pain of not seeing your child. Very good poem Kristina!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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