Thoughts...
Whenever I feel like I can't take it anymore, I remember just how it all was before. All the smiles and laughter we've shared over the years, makes me want to forget all the yelling and the tears. At night when its just the sound of your breathing I hear, I look out my window and dream of a time when you held me close and your heart beat with mine. Now it seems we're slowly drifitng apart, Why can't we just go back to the way things were, to a time and place where we never had to race, never had to run. All our time was spent enjoying the sun. So many memories I can pick and choose from, They won't keep me warm or dry my tears, they won't give me the hugs that I once held so dear. All they can do is me remind of the person that I once knew...Thoughts...
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Chaos128 commented on Thoughts...
10-27-2010
- You portray sadness, well, K. I hope the day soon comes when you won't remember what it feels like.
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10/28/2010
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Rygar commented on Thoughts...
10-16-2010
- full of lamenting and sadness, longing is felt throughout, nicely done :)
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