Confusion

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    Confusion

     

    Sorrow surrounds me, and pain consumes me.

    Losing you has defenitely confused me.

    My heart is calling out to yours,

    yet all I hear is the sound of my own tears.

    So far apart we are, yet our bond they cannot break.

    I just don't know how much more I can take...

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    speed11935 commented on Confusion

    07-13-2009

    Losing someone is a tragedy. But let him go. There are other fish in the sea. I hope writing this though relieved the pain. I know when I throw my emotions into a poem, it expresses for me the emotions I cannot express otherwise
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    laydbak1 commented on Confusion

    07-06-2009

    Losing someone is a time of confusion for the heart, but the soul and the mind overcome that and eventually realizes the loss had a greater purpose than what we feel right now... In the words of an old saying, "This too, shall pass"... The heart will live and love on, another time, another place, another reason to feel... Good write, very passionate...
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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