Betrayed

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    Betrayed

    I told you I loved him, yet you didn't care.

    The moment I left you went right over there...

    Knowing my feelings didn't seem to stop you ,

    my question is what kind of friend are you?

    You took from me something special and true

    the love of my life now belongs to you...

    You betrayed me in the very worst way,

    I'm hoping and praying that you'll get yours

    someday...

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Betrayed

    09-12-2010

    Hey, I have walked both sides of the plank. She will get hers, maybe you won't see it, but she will. It is a wonderful poem. You set the tone for her and it was very clear.
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    KristyLoren commented on Betrayed

    08-28-2009

    Snap!! I LOVE it. Betrayal is screaming here and loud. Karma is as most of us know a total mind screw and through your writing here I hope they get theirs also. This is a perfectly written piece of work. You get my 20 even though I can only give a 10. LOVED IT!!!!!
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    Chaos128 commented on Betrayed

    08-20-2009

    Ouch... The shortest distance between two points is a laser sight, ha ha!
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    dezarawr commented on Betrayed

    07-17-2009

    haha ive been through this before, good write i liked it
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    PRober commented on Betrayed

    07-06-2009

    retribution is a bitch ain't it? nice one, short and not sweet! write on!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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