The Fire

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    The Fire

     The fire burns passionate and bright.

    Not even the sun can match its light.

    The fire burns fierce and warm,

    More fervent than the coming storm.

    The fires intensity rages on,

    But it can't last, not for too long.

    The fire blazing through their veins,

    Oblivious to the final pain.

    Like fuel their passion is consumed.

    A prelude to the coming doom.

    The fire devouring all in its path.

    A love like this not meant to last.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on The Fire

    04-27-2010

    This is a great passionate yet horrific write.. ty for sharing this with us.
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    Dano commented on The Fire

    04-22-2010

    i can almost feel the heat coming off of this... the rhythm and flow are impecable... very nicely written
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    BringMeBullets commented on The Fire

    02-25-2010

    I love the rhyme scheme. Your talent shines bright in this one... My new favorite. Thank you for sharing. :)
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    MarionYost commented on The Fire

    02-01-2010

    Love the wording, Love the flow, this is a 10. Great job. All the best -Marion-
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    hcrellers commented on The Fire

    02-01-2010

    ^ totally gave me chills. very very good. your a beautiful writer.vivid images. wonderful bravo
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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