Letting Go

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  • Lost Love

    Letting Go

     Can't you feel the emptiness inside

    The barren place I try so frantically to hide

    This is not at all what I expected

    Not so long ago we felt totally connected

    It seems as though you have severed those ties

    Moving on, not even bothering with good-byes

    I know that this is all my fault

    I made the choice, not giving it a second thought

    Things turned out the way they should have

    We were not destined to walk the same path

    There is no use dwelling on the past

    Because what we had was never meant to last

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    mariadapoesia commented on Letting Go

    02-08-2010

    Sometimes we are better off by letting go... very well written. Good job!
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    Mandi commented on Letting Go

    02-03-2010

    nice verse about feelings handled well a little more upbeat than the rest of your work I like it
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    MarionYost commented on Letting Go

    02-01-2010

    I love your style. I can definitely relate to your writes. Nice flow with this. All the best -Marion-
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    hcrellers commented on Letting Go

    02-01-2010

    i love this. its a beautiful image of love broken. if that can happen. u did it.
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    Marsink commented on Letting Go

    01-22-2010

    A good outlook in what many become bitter over, or always bleeding over. I enjoyed the casual flow of emotions!
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